buhat hi zabardast ha janab keeep it uppppp

sorry muskan muje apki story ka focus bilkul pasand nhi aya.. bcz ya mere personal review hai bez mein is type ko stories ko always discourage kerti houn

bahar haal baki sab ka apna mind hai

Waniya Dear,

Bila Shuba Kahani Bohat hi Achhi hai, Mujhe nahi pata ke aapko ismay kia cheez nazar aai hai, agar aap iski Wazahat kar deti to shayad hamari bhi samajh may aaa jaata

اچھی کہانی تھی۔ لکھنے کا انداز کافی منجھا ہوا اور منفرد تھا۔

اچھی کہانی تھی۔ لکھنے کا انداز کافی منجھا ہوا اور منفرد تھا۔

لو جناب آپ کو تو سند مل گئی مسکان جی

jahan tak baat he likhnay ki to wo kafi acha likha gia he , and jahan tak baat he Waniya ki , i a bit agree bt mere agree krnay ki wja ye he k haqeeqat se bohat door ja kr likhi gai he kahani, try to be realistic, bt anyways all the best,

Great Work Muskan G Really Really hottt Story Dear Thanks

uffffffffffff ..... kiaaaa zamana ... agayaa hai ...

ab muth hi marni paray gi is par ....

I was told by my some well wishers that my written stories are being copy pasted here.

I would request to the Admin of this site, to please take disciplinary action against this muskan gee, who is cheater.

Sumera Zafar Sahiba,

Lagta hai ke aap ko kuchh ziada hi Self Confidance ho gaya hai,

BB Ye Net ki Dunya hai, aur bohat saare Log aur doosre Forums ke bhi members hote hain, Jisko jo cheez jidhar achhi lagti hai to wo Uss forum se uthaa kar Doosre Forum per Post kar deta hai, issmay cheeting waali konsi baat hai, Aur waise bhi iss story may aapka naam kaheen likhaa huwa nazar nahi aaa raha hai,.

Mujhe to dar hai ke kal ko aap ye na keh dain ke Dr. Faisal bhi aapki Stories ko copy kar ke Post karta hai

Saboot to aap de nahi rahi hain aur baat copy paste ki kar rahi hain

Sumera Zafar Sahiba,

Lagta hai ke aap ko kuchh ziada hi Self Confidance ho gaya hai,

BB Ye Net ki Dunya hai, aur bohat saare Log aur doosre Forums ke bhi members hote hain, Jisko jo cheez jidhar achhi lagti hai to wo Uss forum se uthaa kar Doosre Forum per Post kar deta hai, issmay cheeting waali konsi baat hai, Aur waise bhi iss story may aapka naam kaheen likhaa huwa nazar nahi aaa raha hai,.

Mujhe to dar hai ke kal ko aap ye na keh dain ke Dr. Faisal bhi aapki Stories ko copy kar ke Post karta hai

Saboot to aap de nahi rahi hain aur baat copy paste ki kar rahi hain

سب کچھ تو سرفروش نے کہہ دیا ساڈے لئی کوئی گل نئی چھڈی