Hassan.

@DR KHANPardes ke new episode kb tak ayegi, Last update ko 6 month se zda hogaya hai, Ham srf ise story kelye ate hai to please iske update ke date bta den.

53 Epsiode jb be aye to yha sb ko bta den

HWas ke is Year ke update agye hai ke ni?

@DR KHAN Sir koi update aye ge kse story ke ya srf ye cloud or dosre chezen chlte rahen ge, itne arse se kse story ke update tak ni hai, srf purchase he chal rha hai, Ab to yad be ni rehta ke urdufunclub jesa koi forum hai, Or be kafi ache stories wale forum hai wha pe guzara kr rhe ham, par idr kse update ka name he ni hai srf purchases krte raho, Ase to koi faida be ni

Is ko apne style me he likhen, srf sex wale stories se to net brha hwa hai. Pardes ke fan following be srf suspense or thrill ke wja se he hai.

Traning wala scene kafi acha tha, tough traning ase he hte hai, Hme to traning me intreset hai ,roze se koi hamdardi ni

Acha start hai, wqt ke sath story sai khul ke samne ayege

Story me kafi jaan hai, interest kafi rhega isme, par pardes or hwas pe be tohra dehan den

Itne story parne ke bad or parhne ka zda interest hoga to log pay be krenge. Js ko ap ade story keh rhe hai ye to paid view me srf 3 se 5 pages hain, or abe 104 pages tak post ja chuke hai jo apke parte parte be kam az kam hafta lge ga agar ap sara din be parhen

Kafi arse bad kch bhtr story nazar aye hai.

Ache quality ke chezon kelye itna to karna parta hai