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LAGTA HAI YE STORY BHI INCOMPLETE HI RAHE GI WRITER SIRF TASALLION PE KAM CHALA RAHE HAIN UPDATE KAB DEN GE KCH NAHI PATA

welldone admin aaj apke is action se buhut khoshi hoi ye begherat lagta hai musalma hi nahi jo apna keena aur bughaz in pakbaz aur muqaddas hastion ke name use kerwane kelie apne ghatia khialat ka izhar ker raha hai

waji bhai ap ne kaha tha 4 october ko is sunday ko update ajae gi lekin 2 sunday guzer gae kch pata nahi ager naraz na hon tu sirf itna bata den ke mazid kitna time hum w8 karen apki masrofiat aur majborion ka hame andaza hai bande ke pas gharelo aur rizq kamane kelie bhi apna waqt nikalna hota hai jo pehli priority hoti hai lekin mjhe zti tor se apki ye story buhut jandar achi lagi islie poch raha hon ke apne qeemti waqt se thora time nikal ke aik jandar update ker den

zafar bhai mere alfaz se ager ap ki dil azari hoi tu uskelie tahe dil se mazrat ka talabgar hon lekin 1 bat ka jawab zaror digie ga jab itna acha likh rahe the aur aen us waqt pe jab climax aya tu likhna kion chor dia kia esa tu nahi ye story kisi aur forum se copy paste ki gai thi jitni wahan post hoi utni ap ne bhi ker di ager meri bat ghalat hai tu phir ap plz ese complete karen werna man len jo maine kaha wohi sahi hai..ummid hai ab apko mere alfaz bure na lage hon ge. apka well wisher

muhtaram jo hrkat apne is story ke sath ki hai woh pehli dafa nahi horahi akser tumhare jese writers logon ko apni taraf mutwajja kerne kelie yahi kerte hain aur kahani ko mukammal kie bagher bhag jate hain 8 pages mai se tmne total 5 pages likhe aur tmhare mutabiq 100 readers ne comments kie yani average 20 comments 1 page pe aur 50000 ne view kia jo 1 page ke hisab se 10000 views bante hain itne comments aur views tu ke baber khan aur is forum ke Dr. khan ko bhi shaed nahi milte meri advice hai aainda medan chor ke bhagne se pehle koi aur chotiape ka excuse dena

lagta hai yahan bhi incomplete stories ka chapter shoro ho chuka hai