On 10/11/2021 at 10:15 PM, Jamal baba said:

Yar bhai log kitni dafa kaha ha ke story complete ho gi to ho gi naa. Keh jo raha hn bhai. Pata nahi samajh kiun nahi aati. Theek ha update thori late ho jaati ha lekin iska ye mtlb to nahi ke story incomplete ha.Bhai jab ma ne keh diya tha ke Update aa rahi ha to aa jaati naa. Thori der ho gae uske liye Mazraat lekin yaar hamaari personal life bhi ha uske liye bhi time nikalna parta ha.Story ki aik update ke liye 2 sa 3 ghante chahiye hote hn. Jab time milta ha likhna shuru kar deta hn.Yar thori der ho gae uske liye Mazraat lekin yaara sach bolun to bohot dukh hua aapke replys parh ke. 

 

Aakhri baat phir bata dn ke story complete ho gi. Chahe aik update ma ho ya phir 100 updates ma. Agar aapko bohot zayaada jaldi ha to btaa dein ma story ka khulaasa aik update ma de kar kahani the end kar deta hn. Baaki aapki marzi.

 

Ab sa weekly 1 sa 2 updates aaya karein gi regularly.Koshish puri ho gi baki agar kisi masle ki wajaa sa late ho jae to plzz advance ma maazraat kabool farmaye. Thank you so much. 

Take your time bro..... No need to rush.... We can wait

 

Update 39

 

Uske ghar waali gaali ma puhnche to kaafi hal chal nazar aae. Uske ghar ke bahir kaafi log jamma the. Ma ne bike aik jaga neem andhere ma khari ki or Jenny sa bola

 

Me:Yahin intezaar karo mera ma dekh ke aata hn kya hua ha?? 

 

Ma Kamraan ke ghar ki taraf barh gaya. Kafi log darwaaze ma khare the. Ma bheer ko cherta hua ghar ke gate tak puhncha to police waale khare the. Chote darwaaze ke pass andar or bahir ki taraf kaafi khoon nazar aaya. Ma andar daakhil hua to  sehen ka manzar dekh kar aik dam shook reh gaya. 

 

Andar sehen ma farash par Kamraan or uske waalid sahab ki laashein pari thi. Jee haan dono ki khoon ma lat paat laashein pari thi. Ma abhi is shock sa nahi nikla tha ke mujhe kissi ki sargoshi sunae di.

 

 AGAR MAZEED NUKSAAN NAHI CHAHTE TO ULTE HAATH GALI KI NUKAR PAR GARI KHARI HA CHUP CHAP US ME JAA KAR BETH JAO. TUMHAARI RAKHAIL US MA BEHOSH PARI HA. 

 

ma ne peeche mur kar dekha to koi khaas bnda nazar naa aaya. Ma wahan sa nikla or gali ki nukar ki taraf chalne laga. Raaste ma mujhe chori ki hui bike or Jenny dono hi nazar naa aaye. Ma teez kadmoo sa gaali ki nukar par puhncha to mujhe aik gaari khari nazar aayi. Ma ne pechli khirki sa andar jhaanka to mujhe Jenny nazar aayi. Ma jaldi sa car ma beth gaya. 

 

Ma junhi car ma dakhil hua aik ajeeb si bu mere naak sa takraayi or ma behosh ho gaya. 

 

Hosh ma aaya to do aadmi mujhe apne kandhoo par uthaaye kahin le jaa rahe the. 

 

Thori der baad aik puraani si factory ma le jaa kar unho ne mujhe neche farash par daal diya. Ma aankhein malte hye uth betha. Mere kareeb hi Jenny bhi ghutanoo ke bal bethi hui thi. Hum dono ke haath pushat par bandhe hue the. Ma na aankhoo hi aankhoo ma usse tasali di. 

 

Tabhi bohot sare kadmoo ki aawazein ubharne lagi. Hum us taraf mutwaja ho gae. Aik kafi mota sa aadmi mu ma sigaar dabaaye hamari taraf aa raha tha. Uske peche 5 kafi khoonkhaar kisam ke kaale habshi body guards the.

 

Mere samne puhunch kar paon ke bal neche betha or phir sigaar ka dhuwaan mere chehre par chorte hue bola

 

Aadmi:ab doodh peete londe hamara kaam band karein??Jaante ho tum na hamare karobaar ke sab se aehaam muhree ko maar kar kitni bari ghalti ki ha?? 

 

Me:itni aeham to nahi thi wo. Koi aur dhoondh lo us uni ma jo tumhaare liye kaam kar sake. Paise ke aage kiska zoor chaalta ha. 

 

Us na mujhe gardan sa pakar liya or phir gusse sa bhari dabi hui awaaz  ma bola

 

Aadmi:wo koi aam aurat nahi thi. Kaale khan ka saab sa bara pataa tha. Bole to hukum ka ikaa tha wo mere liye. 

 

Me:Ye jnb kaale khan kon hn?? 

 

Wo mera sawal ignore karte hue bola

 

Aadmi:Tu ne jisse maara wo pure karachi ma kaale khan ka drugs ka Business chalati thi. Har university ma usske aadmi the. Har college ma uski khareedi hui teachers thi.Gore log jab yahan deal karne aate the to wo chun chun kar aik sa barh kar aik larki unhein supply karti thi. Wo aik heera thi heera. 

 

Me:phir to acha hua ke wo maari gae. 

 

Us ne aik zoordaar thapar mere chehre par jaar diya. Mera sar seedha farsh sa jaa laga. Baen Kanpaati sa khoon behta hua mehsoos hua or daen gaal par thapar ki jalan ka aehsaas hone laga. Bari mushkil sa seedha hua to wo aadmi bola

 

Admi:kabhi Kaale Khan sa zubaan mat laraana. 

 

Wo itna keh kar Jenny ki taraf barha. 

 

Kaale khan:to tu ne ki gadaari wo bhi kaale khan sa. Iska anjaam jaanti ha kya?? 

 

Itna kehte hi usne pistol nikala or Jenny ki peshaani par rakh kar gooli chala di. Sab kuch itna achaanak hua ke ma heraan pareshaan reh gaya. 

 

Kaale khan pistol pent ma ursaa ka mere kareeb aaya or meri aankho ma dekhte hue bola

 

Kaale Khan:Jaante ho aaj tak jisne bhi kaale khan sa takraane ki himmat ki Kaale khan ne usse kabhi nahi maara. 

 

Us ne aik gehri saans li or phir bola

 

Kaale Khan:Usne uske ke kareeb rehne waale sab logon ko khatam kar diya. Lekin usse sari umar tarapne ke liye zinda rakha. 

 

Apne kareebi dost or apni 4 din ki daashta ki laash to dekh li tum ne. Aao tumhein aik aur mazedaar scene dekhata hn. 

 

Usne apni jaeb sa mobile nikala or phir aik video chala di or mobile screen mere samne karte hue bola

 

Kaale Khan:Dekh jis ke liye tune ye saab kiya uska kya hashar kiya hum ne.dekh to zra. 

 

Ma ne mobile screen ki taraf tawaja di to wahan Nazia ka chehra nazar aaya.Zaalimo na usse bath tub ma letaya hua tha.Sar bilkul bath tub ke bottom par rakha tha or paani chalu kar diya. Aahista aahista paani bhaarne laga. Uska chehre paani ma doobne laga. Bechari tarap rahi thi lekin kuch kar nahi sakti thi. Zaalimo ne tub pura bhar diya tha. Nazia ke jisam ma koi haal chaal dikhae nahi di. 

 

Ma ne aankhein band kar li.Meri aankhoo sa khamosh aansoo behne lage.Ma gusse sa bhari awaaz ma bola 

 

Me:Kaale khan utni hi aziyaat dena mujhe jitni phir tum seh sakoo. 

 

Kaale Khan na aik unchaa kehkaha lagaya or phir bola

 

Kaale Khan:ye to abhi trailer tha. Asal film to ab chaale gi. Suna ha tumhaari aik behen aik bivi or 2 bache bhi hn. 

 

Me:agar unhein kuch hua to ma tujhe zinda nahi choron ga. 

 

Kaale Khan :unke saath bohot kuch ho chuka ha.Bigaar le jo mera bigaarna ha. 

 

Wo kuch der khamosh raha phir bola

 

Kaale khan:ye dekh 

 

Or saath hi mere samne mobile screen kar di. 

 

Mujhe apne ghar ka lawn dikhae diya. Hania mere dono betoo ke saath lawn ma bethi hui thi. Kuch der baad wo uthi mere dono betoon ko apne dono baazoon ma uthae andar chali gae or uske andar daakhil hone ke kuch hi der baad ghar aik khoofnaak dhamaake sa blast ho gaya. 

 

Ma pagaloo ki tarha chilaaya

 

Me:Kaale kan ma tujhe zinda nahi choron ga. Kutte ke bache haraam ki aulaad haath khol mere tujhe bataon ma. Gandu insaan masoom bachoo ko maar kar mujhe dhamkaana chahta ha. Ma tere tukre tukre......... 

 

Achaanak kaale khan ke peeche mujhe aik chehra nazar aaya usse yahan dekh kar ma heraan ho gaya or jab uski halaat dekhi to ma behosh ho gaya. 

 

 

Pata nahi ma kitni der behosh raha.Jab hosh ma aaya to pechle tamam wakiyaat meri nigaahoon ma ghoomne lage. Pehle Kamraan or uske waalid ki laash phir Jenny phir Nazia ki mout or phir mere ghar ma Hania or bachoo ki maujoodi ma blast kar jaana Or aakhir Asma ki wo halaat. 

 

Jee haan wo Asma hi thi jisse ma ne behosh hone sa pehle dekha tha. Lekin uski halaat mujh sa dekhi nahi gae. Uske dono haathoo ki chaaro ungliyaa kaat di gae thi. 

 

Mujhe hosh ma aata dekh kar kaale khan mere pass aaya or bola

 

Kaale khan:Jo nuksaan tu ne hamara kiya ha uske badle ye kuch bhi nahi. Karachi ma drugs ka sara hisaab kitaab jis ke pass tha tune usse maar diya. 5 Crore sa zayada ki rakam logon sa leni thi. Kis sa kitni leni thi wo sirf wohi jaanti thi. Abhi jo naya maal aaya ha usko bechane ke liye hamare pass koi bharoose ka bnda nahi ha. 6 sa 7 crore ka ye nuksaan or abhi aur maal aa raha ha uski payment baki ha wo or nuksaan. Tujhe pakarne ke liye tere dost ko maar diya. Jenny gadaar thi usse tapkaa diya. Jiski waja sa tune hamara itna nuksaan kiya usse bhi maar diya. Tere bachoo ko zinda jalaya same ussi tarha jis tarha tune hamare sab sa aeham muhre ko jalayaa.Phir teri bivi ki ungliyaa kaati jis tarha tune Karachi ma fil wakat hamare haath kaat diye hn. 

 

Me:Kaale khan abhi moka ha maar do mujhe warna bara pichtao ge. 

 

Kaale Khan:Tum dubara hamari taraf aao ge to hum bhi dubara tumhaari taraf aaein ge. Or hamara aana kaisa ha ye tum dekh hi chuke ho. 

 

Me:mujhe chor kar zindagi ki sab sa bari ghalti kar rahe ho. Bohot pichtaoge. 

 

Kaale Khan:Jaa tujhe azaad karta hn or haan Kaale Khan tum sa agli mulaakaat ke liye intezaar kare ga. 

 

Me:phir sooch lo aik dafa. 

 

Kaale Khan:oo sheedey isko or iski zanani ko behosh kar ke chor aao inke ghar. 

 

Thori der baad peeche sa kissi na aa kar mere chehre par roomal rakha. Thori hi der ma ma behosh ho gaya. 

 

Hosh aaya to ma kissi kamre ma bed par laita hua thi. Halki halki siskiyo ki aawazein sunae di. Karwaat badli to mere saath hi Asma leti roo rahi thi. 

 

Meri bhi aankhoo sa aansoo behne lage. Ma na usse kheench kar apne seene sa laga liya or phir dono hi rone lage. Rote rote pata nahi kab meri aankh lag gae. 

 

Dubara aankh khuli to Asma mere seene par hi leti soo rahi thi. Mere dimaag ma Kaale Khan ke wo aalfaaz goonjane lage

 

JAA TUJHE AZAAD KARTA HN. KAALE KHAN TUJH SA AGLI MULAKAAT KE LIYE INTEZAAR KARE GA. 

 

ma apne aansoo pooche or phir Unchi awaaz ma chilaya

 

Me:Bohot jald Kaale Khan bohot jald tujh sa mulakaat ho gi. Bohot jald

 

Asma harbara kar uth bethi. Ma na dubara usse kheench kar apne seene sa laga liya or uski peshaani choom kar bola 

 

Me:Aaenda hum dono un Zaalimo ki mout tak nahi roein ge. Aik aansoo nahi bahaen ge. 

 

Tabhi darwaaze par dastak hui. Darwaaze ki taraf dekha to Aga jee ka chehra nazar aaya. 

 

Aga Jee:beta theek to ho naa. 

 

Me:Hum kahan hn aga jee. 

 

Aga Jee:Orphanage ma hn or kahan hona ha beta. 

 

Me:Hamara ghar......... 

 

Aga jee:Sorry beta tumhara ghar to sara.... 

 

Unki aankhein nam ho gae. Thori der baad wo bole

 

Aga jee:lekin aik good news ha??? 

 

Me:wo kyaa??? 

 

Aga jee unchi awaaz ma bole 

 

Aga jee :aa jao. 

 

Unke itna kehte hi jo shaksiyaat kamre ma dakhil hui usse dekh kar ma heraan pareshaan reh gaya.... ...

Jamal Baba Update to weakly bhy ni Aii yaar

Story apki Zabrdst hay .. lakin update na honay ki wujha say mutttt Maar dii hay .story ki...

Nice Update. But Kindly Maintain Punctuality In publishing New Updates

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Nice bro maza aagaya 

Kamal ke update dhowan dar update the maza aya 

Buhat zabardast moor dia khani ko, 

Lagta hai hania aur bachey bach gay.

Wait for next update 😉