Update 18
 

Atif ko gay hovy 2 din ho gay per us ka kuch pata nhi tha or mainy bhi free bethny ki bjy baji arfa k ghar ki talash start kr di jo k jahan main rehta tha us k nazdek hi tha 2 din bad atif wapis aya

Main.han kuch pata chala ali k bhai k

Atif.han pata chal gaya hy

Main.kaha hy wo

Atif.apny ghar

Main.kia matlab

Atif.ali k ghar k pichy aik teh khana hy usi mai chupa k rakha hy

Main.hmmm sach mai imran kafi chalak hy usy pata tha k ali har jaga apny bhai ki talash kry ga per apny ghar kabhi nhi esi lia us ny usy wahin rakha hy

Atif.han or us k pass bas 2 log hi hoty hain jin mai sy aik khana leny bahir jay to dosra us per nazar rakhta hy

Main.hmm thek hy ab ya btao k ali akala kab mill sakta hy

Atif.rat ko 9 bjy k bad wo aik hotel jata hy khana khany wahin mily ga

Main.ok aj rat ali sy milty hain phr kia khyal hy

Atif.ali sy abhi Q milna hy

Main.wo rat ko pata chaly gaUs k bad kuch khas nhi hova rat ko 9 bajy main usi hotel mai aa gaya jahan mujhy ali sy milna tha main wahan ja k beth gaya or us ka intzar krny laga takrebn 20 mint bad wo aaya to atif ny mujhy us ki table ki taraf eshara kr k btaya k yahi ali hy mainy us ki taraf dakha to aik banda betha tha kafi achi body banai thi us ny or wo betha bhi akala tha main apni table sy uth k us ki table per beth gaya

Ali.g ap kon kia chyiea

Main.g mera naam kashif hy

Ali.to main kia kron jao yahan sy

Main.kia tum ali ho

Ali.han main hi hon tum ko ho or mujhy kesy janty ho

Main.wo sab bad ki bad hy mujhy kuch chyiea

Ali.kia chyiea tum ko

Main.tum or tumhri team badly mai tum ko main wo dy sakta hon jis k lia tum itny saal sy try kar rahy ho

Ali.bachy tum janty nhi main kon hon abhi k abhi tum ko yahin khtam kr sakta hon or koi pochy ga bhi nhi mujhy

Main.janta hon per mujhy jo lena hy wo to tum zror do dy badly mai tum ko wo mily ga jo tum ko chyiea

Ali.mujhy kuch nhi chyiea bachy

Main.soch lo tum ko kuch nhi chyiea

Ali.bachy chala ja yaha sy or mujhy kuch nhi chyiea

Main.kuch bhi nhiAli.kuch bhi nhi

Main.tumhra bhai bhi nhi

Meri es bat sy wo mujhy ghor k dakhny laga

Main.mujhy pata hy tumhra bhai kahan hy yaken nhi aa raha na chalo aik deal krty hain main tum ko tumhra bhai la k deta don badly mai tum mujhy wo dena jo main chata hon bolo manzor hy Meri bat sun k us ny gun nikal k mujh per tan di

Main.ok shoot me per sari zindgi bhol jana apny bhai ko (unchi awaz mai) chalao goli Meri awaz sun k sab mujhy dakhny lagy per samny ali ko dakh k kisi ny kuch nhi kia mery es trhan krny sy wo thora thnda ho gaya

Ali.main kesy maan lon k tum mujhy mera bhai laa do gy

Main.2 din sirf 2 din mai tumhra bhai tumhry pass ho ga

Ali.agr tum ny mujhy mera bhai la dia to mai wada karta hon k sari zindgi tumhri ghulami krny ko tyar hon or agr tum ny koi game khailny ki koshish ki to

Main.ok phr beshak tum mujhy maar dena ok Us ny mujhy aik paper per aik nmbr likh k dia

Ali.ya mera personal nmbr hy jis ka pata sirf cand logon ko hy mujhy es nmbr per rabta kr sakty ho

Mainy usy sy wo nmbr lia or bahir aa gaya or apny ghar aa k so gaya agly din subha uth k fresh ho k main sochny laga k ab keh to dia k 2 din mai kr lon ga per kron kesy yahi smjh nhi aa raha tha k atif aa gaya

Atif.kia hova kuch prashan hoMain.han yar usy keh to dia k 2 din mai usy us ka bhai mill jay ga per kesy smjh nhi aa rahi

Atif.simple hy us k pass jo 2 log hain un ko mar k azad krwa lo or kia

Main.or tum ko lgta hy ya asan hy wahan sirf wihi 2 hon gy es bat ki kia grentee hy jahan tak mainy imran jo smjha hy wo itna pagal nhi hy k sirf 2 bandon k bhrosy usy rakha ho zror usn 2no per kisi ki nazar ho gi

Atif.han yar ya ho sakta hy

Main.chal aj aik game khailty hain

Atif.tu pagal hy kia ali k bhai ko azad krwany k bjay tujhy game khalni hy

Main.aby sun to sahi aj k din ham us ghar per nazar rakhty hain kisi ko pata chlay bina dakhty hain k wahn kia ho raha hy

Atif.chal phr kab chalna hy

Main.bas 10 mint mai niklty hainUs k bad main tif k sath us area mai aa gaya jahan ali ka ghar tha pass hi aik chay ki dukan thi main us dukan k per ja k beth gaya

Larka.kia don bhai

Main.bhai aik cup chay pila do Main ali k ghar ko hi dakh raha tha or sath hi aas pass bhi nazar thi k koi aisa mujhy dakh jay shayad jo us ghar per nazar rakhta ho Dukan waly ny mujhy chay la k di chay piny k bad mai wahin betha raha kafi dair kisi ny kuch nhi kaha

Larka.kia bat hy bhai koi masla hy kia

Main.ary nhi bhai koi masla nhi hy

Larka.kafi dair sy bethy ho koi to waja ho gi

Main.g bhai wo main es sher main naya hon or mujhy mery dost ny yahain milny k lia bulaya tha usi ka intzar kar raha hon

Larka.acha acha mujhy laga tum bhi

Main.main bhi kia

Larka.bhai samny jo ghar dakh rahy ho

Main.haLarka.es ghar mai 2 log rehty hain per hamesha aik hi bahir aata hy or 2ra andr rehta hy jab 2ra bhir aata hy to pehly wala andr hi rehta hy or us k sath waly ghar ki chat per hamesha ik admi bar bar aa kar us ghar ki taraf dakhta hy mujhy laga tum bhi unhi mai sy ho

Main.acha per us sy mera kia lena dena main un mai sy nhi

Larka.aksar wo chat wala admi aa k mujh sy pochta hy k koi aya to nhi ya kisi ny us ghar k bary mai pocha to nhi

Main.ary nhi bhai mujhy kisi sy kia lena dena main to apny kaam sy aya hon agr ap ko prashani ho rahi hy to mai chala jata hon

Larka.ary nhi bhai mujhy koi prashani nhi hy main to bas aisy hi

Main.acha thek hy mehrbani aik cuo chay or pila do mazydar si

Larka.abhi lo bhai

Us k bad main kafi dair waha betha raha mujhy wo chat wala admi bhi dikha mainy sab kuch note kia k kab kon kis wakt kia krta hy mujhy un ki timing or routen pata chal gai ab mujhy wahan sy niklna tha or main khud ko kisi khatry main nhi dalna chata tha eai lia jaib sy mobile nikal k kan per laga dia(yahan aty wakt new mobile ly lia tha) or bat krny laga

Main.han bhai kaha hy kab sy tera intzar kar raha hon acha aj nhi ao gy chalo main phr bad mai milta honYa sab drama kar k chay waly ko paisy dy k wahan sy nikal gaya

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Update 19
 

Agly din ab mujhy action krna tha per start kaha sy kron kuch smjh nhi aa raha tha k atif aa gaya

Atif.kia soch raha hy

Main.tum kuch help kr sakty ho

Atif.kis mamly mai

Main.wo 3 log jo us ghar per nazar rakhty hain

Atif.sorry mai jitni help kr sakta tha kar di

Main.ok main kuch krta hon bas aj ka hi din hy mery pass

Atif.ab kia kro gy

Main.kuch to kron ga hi aab hi phly us chat waly ko thikany lgana ho ga us k bad hi kuch ho sakta hyUs k bad mai or atif waha sy nikal pary ali k ghar waha ja k mainy ghoor say dakha to us chat k kareb hi aik or bilding thi or us ki chat bhi us k sath thi matlab aik building sy dosri per aaram sy jaa sakty thy main us 2nd building k andr aa gaya us waha sy chup k us k sath wali per aa gaya jab waha dakha to waha 2 log thy main chup k un ki bat sunny laga 2ra admi un dono main sy aik tha jo ghar k andr rehty thy

Chat wala.yar or kitna es ka khyal rakhna hy

Ghar wala.bas aj rat tak kal subha hoty hi es ka kaam khtam boss ny esy marny ka hukam dia hy

Chat wala.chalo thek hy jan chuty gi es harami sy

Ghar wla.han yar main khud prashan ho gaya hon es sy

Chat wala.wesy to ab ja kaha raha tha

Ghar wala.khana leny us ki zindgi ka akhri khanaYa sab bat kar k wo dono hasny lagay wo apni hi masti mai thy mujhy yahi wakt thek laga wo kuch smjh paty us sy phly mainy us per hamla kar dia or sab sy phly us aadmi ki garden per kick mari jo uper sy hifazat karta tha Q k us k pass gun thi agr wo pehly na girta to kuch bhi ho sakta tha meri kick lagty hi wo gir gaya or mainy foran hi dosry ko bhi punch mara us ki nak toot gai or wo bhi gir gaya tab tak pehly wala uth chuka tha or us ny gun nikal li thi per us k fire krny sy phly hi mainy us k hath per mari gun us k hath k sy nikal k dur ja giri ab wo dono smbhal chuky thy ab hmari fight start ho chuki thi kabhi wo mujh per bhari party kabhi main un per boht mushkil sy aik ki garden k pichy mainy war ki jis sy wo behosh ho gaya isi trhan 2sry ko bhi mainy behosh kr dia or wahin beth k apni sansyn bhal krny laga k atif ny kaha

Atif.yar in dono ko khtam kr dy

Main.wesy soch main bhi yahi raha hon

Atif.han yar ya na ho k en ko hosh aa jay or ya mazed masla kryn

Main.han esi lia main bhi soch raha hon k in ko khtam kr don wesy bhi ya mujrim hi hon gy jo bury kaam hi krty hain Phr mainy un dono ko garden tor di or wahan sy nichy aa gaya ab bas aik hi thi jis ko thikany lgana tha wahan sy nikal k main us ki taraf chal para ghar k pichy teh khany tak aany k bad mainy wahan ka darwaza khola or andr aa gaya andr 2 rooms thy ab mujhy ya pata nhi tha k wo kahan hy esi lia main wahan darwazy per kaan laga k sunny laga shayad kuch pata chal jay andr sy mujhy kisi ki awaz ai mainy darwazy per knock kia or wahin aik piller k pichy chup gaya or us k bahir aany ka wait karny laga jab us ny bahir aa k dakha to usy koi nazar na aya wo phr sy andr chla gayaKuch dair wait krny k bad mainy phr usi trhan kia ab jab wo bahir aaya to us k hath mai gun thi or wo chup k dakhny laga k kon hy jab wo piller k pass aya to mainy pichy sy usy pakr k jaldi sy us ki garden mor di jis sy wo wahin mar gaya ab mera rasta saaf tha phr bhi mujhy jaldi krna tha koi bhi yahan aa sakta tha jab main andr gaya to aik larka kursi k sath bandha hova tha mujhy dakhty hi

Larka.pls mujhy mat maro dakho main kuch nhi kron ga pls mujhy chor do main koi shor bhi nhi kron ga Us ki baton sy mujhy laga k wo dimaghi marez hy wo dakhny main 16 ya 17 ka lag raha tha per us ka dimagh kisi 5 saal k bachy jitna hi tha

Main.chup ho jao main tum ko kuch nhi kron ga

Larka.sach mai ap mujhy kuch nhi kro gy

Main.nhi main to tum ko leny aya hon

Larka.ap bht achy uncle ho ap mujhy mery bhaiya k pass ly chalo na dakho ya log mujhy boht marty hain

Main.han beta chalo main ap ko ap k bhaiya k pass ly chalta hon ab ap bilkul bhi nhi bolna okUsy wahan sy lay k main bahir aa gaya chupky sy aik taxi ki or usy lay k apny ghar ki taraf chal para rasty mai hi mainy ali ko call ki

Ali.hello kon

Main.kashif

Ali.han bolo kis lia fon kia hy

Main.tumhra kaam ho gaya hy

Ali kushi sy. kia sach mai

Main.bolo kahan milna hy

Ali.tum ***** aa jao

Main.nhi tum aik kaam kro apni team k sath mery pass aa jao main address tum ko msg kr deta hon

Ali.Q tum mery pass aa jao

Main.tum mery pass ao phr btata hon abhi wakt nhi hy Mainy us ki bat suny bina hi call end kr di or usy apny ghar ka pata msg kr dia

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Nice story.... maza agya pharnay ka keep it up budy and don't stop your hands for writting....

Update 20
 

Takrebn 1 ghanty bad hi wo aa gaya us k sath 4 or log thy jin mai 3 larky or aik larki thi

Ali.kahan hy wo

Mainy usy andr kamry ki taraf eshra kr dia wo jaldi sy andr bhag gaya ham sab bhi us k pichy gay andr wo dono galy mily hovy thy or ali ki ankh mai anso thy

Larka mujh dakh k.bhaiya ya uncle na boht achy hain enhon ny mujhy chocolate bhi di khana bhi dia or mara bhi nhi or mujhy khilony bhi lay dia hain ya dakho (wo apny khilony dikhany laga)

Ali.Qasim mera bacha ab bhaiya aa gay hain na ab ap ko kuch nhi ho ga main hon na (mujh sy)tumhra boht boht sukria tum ny mujhy meri zindgi wapis la di hy

Main.koi bat nhi wesy bhi mujhy bhi tum sy matlab tha ab agr main tum ko phly hi btaa deta to shayad tum mujhy apna dushman bhi smjh sakty thy

Ali.Qasim beta ap apny khilonon k sath khailo main ap k is bhaiya sy bat kr lon

Qasim. ok bhaiya

Us k bad ham kamry sy bahir aa gay

Larki.tum ko ya mila kaha ham ny har jaga esy tlash kia tha hamyn to nhi mila

Main.bas kismat smjho

Ali.phr bhi kuch pata to chaly itny salon mai ham ko pata nhi chala tum ko kesy mila

Main.acha aik bat btao tumry pass kitny ghar hain

Ali.aik hi hy

Main.or tum kitny arsy sy wahan nhi gay

Ali.7 din sy

Main.or ghar k pichy kitny arsy sy nhi gay

Ali.jab sy qasim gum hova hy

Main.ya tumhry apny ghar mai tha

Ali.kia matlab

Main.tumhry ghar k pichy jo teh khana hy wahin tha

Larka.per wahan kesy matlab wahan hi Q

Main.imran janta tha k tum apny bhai ko sab jaga talash kro gy per apny hi ghar mai kabhi nhi

Larka 2.hmm esi lia aj tak ham ko wo kabhi nhi mila

Ali.ab ya btao k tum ham sy kia chahty ho tum ny mujhy meri zindgi wapis di hy main tumhri ghulami krny ko bhi tayar hon

Main.mujhy tum sy ghulami nhi karwani bas mujhy imran ki barbadi chyiea or us k bad us ki mout

Ali.tum imran ko Q marna chaty ho

Main.hy aik waja us ny mery kisi karebi ko mara hy usi ka badla lena hy mujhy

Larki.tumhry kon sy karebi ko us ny mara hy

Main.hy aik tum log bhi janty ho gy usy

Larka 3.kon hy wo jisy ham bhi janty hain

Main.atif

Ali.kiaaaa atif ko imran ny mara hy

Main.Q tum ko nhi pata

 Ali.nhi ham ko bas ya pata hy k atif mar chuka hy per usi ny mara hy ya pata nhi tha

Main.khair wo sab choro bas ya btao k mera sath do gy k nhi

Ali.bilkul badla to us sy mujhy bhi lena hy

Main.acha tum ko to mai janta hon en ka intro to krwao

Ali.ya hy alina tech expert

Larka2.asif explosive expert 

Larka 3.salem sniper

Larka4.aslam fighter

Main.ok nice to meet u all

Sab. me too

Ali.acha ab ya btao krna kia hy (salem sy) tum Qasim ko lay jao

Main.meri mano to rehny do

Salem.kia matlab

Main.dakho ab tak to imran ko pata chal chuka ho ga k Qasim us k pass ab nhi hy or ab mazeed us ki jan khtry mai aa jay gi mujhy imran janta nhi hy to yahan wo zaida safe hy baki tumhri marzi

Ali.han tum thek keh rahy ho

Main.mainy yahin pass mai aik ghar dakha hy us mai 3 room hain bas aik do din tak wo lay lon ga phr tum 4ron (alina,asif,salem or aslam) tum bhi wahin reh lena es sy tum Qasim ko bhi protect kr pao gy or agy kia krna hy wo bhi soch layn gy btao kia kehty ho

Aslam.han thek hy wesy aik bat btao

Main.kia

Aslam.tum itna sab kesy soch lety ho

Main.sochna parta hy khair wo sab choro abhi rest kro or ali mery khyal sy abhi tum ko jana chyiea agr tum zaida dair yahan rahy to imran ko tum per shak ho jay ga or hmary agly kam k lia us ka tum per yaken hona lazmi hy or han usy kabhi pata na chalny dena k Qasim ab tumhry pass hy

Ali.han thek kehty ho main chalta hon bad mai milon ga Us k jany k bad mainy un 4ron ko bhi rest krny ka kaha esy hi 3 din nikal gay or mainy wo ghar bhi ly lia es mai kuch paisy ali ny bhi dia wo ghar leny k lia phr ham ny rat k time us ghar mai shift kia Qasim ko din mai koi bhi dakh sakta tha 

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19 hours ago, Nigga said:

Nice story.... maza agya pharnay ka keep it up budy and don't stop your hands for writting....

Thanks bro 

Bahi boht achay ja rahay ho.... asi story is forum pa first time dhaki aur believe karo boht maza araha ha pahrnay ka.

Update 21
 

Us k 2 din bad ali aya milny

Ali.han bhai ab btaa kia karna hy

Main.phly to ya btaoo k mery sath kaam krna hy ya mery liye kaam krna hy

Alina.tumhry sath kaam krny mai or tumhry lia kaam krny mai kia fark hy

Main.boht fark hy

Asif.phr bhi

Main.dakho mery sath kaam krny ka matlab hy k tum log imran ko khtam krny mai meri help kro gy or us k bad tum sab apny rasty or main apny

Salem.or tumhry liye kaam krny ka matlab bhi btaa doo

Main.mery liye kaam krny ka matlab hy k imran k bad bhi tum mery lia hi kaam kro gy or es k lia main tum ko tumhri zrorat ki har chez don ga with salary

Ali.or agr ham tumhry sath kaam kryn to

Main.phr ham bas imran ki marny tak sath hon gy

Aslam.us k bad tum kia kro gy

Main.wo mera masla hy ab zahir hy main wela to beth nhi sakta han tum log caho to apas mai aik meting kr lo or faisla kr lo jo bhi tum ko pasand ho mujhy btaa do

Ali.ok ham 1 ghanty tak tum ko btaty hain

Main.ok main phr ghanty tak aata honUs k bad main waha sy bahir aa gaya mery wahan sy aany k bad

Ali.ab tum sab btao k tum sab kia chaty ho us k sath kaam krna ya us k lia kaam krna

Alina.tum kia kehty ho tum ham sab k leader ho tum btao

Aslam.main to us k sath kaam krna cahon ga matlab imran k khtam hony k bad ham alag tum kia kehty ho asif

Asif.main bhi tery sath hon

Ali.or tum salem

Salem.main bhi

Ali.alina tum

Alina.agr meri salah mano to us k lia kaam krna behtr hy

Ali.main bhi yahi kehny wala tha

Asif.or tum ko esa Q lagta hy k ham ko us k lia kaam krna chyiea

Ali.shyad tum logon ny ghor nhi kia jitna dimagh us ka chalta hy jitna wo sochta hy ham nhi soch sakty

Alina.bilkul or tum 3no (asif,salem or aslam sy) ya btao k hamra mission imran khtam hony k bad kia kryn gy phr bhi to kamany k lia kuch na kuch karna hi hy to ya offer buri to nhi hy

Asif.han ya to sach hy k us k jitna ham nhi soch sakty Salem.or main ya nhi smjh paya k itni kam umer mai wo itna kesy sochta hy

Ali.ya to nhi pata per han agr ham us k liye kam krty hain to bad mai bhi ham ko koi masla nhi ho ga jab tak wo khud na kahy k ham us sy alag ho jayn

Alina.or jahan tak mujhy lagta hy wo kabhi esa kry ga nhi

Ali.mujhy bhi yahi lagta hy han ya sach hy k abhi us k pass paisy itny nhi hon gy jis ki waja sy shyad ham ko wo salary bhi zaida sy zaida 15000 tak dy saky per agy dakha jay to ham sab aik sath hain to monthly 75000 ham sab ko boht hon gy

Asif.thek hy main tumhry sath hon Q k mujhy bhi lagta hy k future mai bhi ham sab ko kuch to krna hi hy to esi k sath Q nhi

Us k bad sab ny mill k faisla kia k wo sab mery liye kaam kryn gy aik ghanty bad main bhi wapis aa gaya

Main.mera khyal hy k tum sab ny apna faisla kr lia ho ga

Ali.han ham sab ny faisla kr lia hy or wo ya k ham tumhry liye kaam krny ko tyar hain

Main.ok thats good to ab thora khul k bat kar lety hain

Ali.han ya thek hy

Main.sab sy phly to ya k abhi to mery pass zaida kuch nhi hy but phr bhi 20000 tak salary main tum sab ko don ga

Ali.hmmm (asif sy) mainy kaha tha na

Main.kia kaha tha

Ali.sach kahon to ham ny bhi yahi socha tha k abhi tumhry pass itna paisa nhi hy or ham ny 15000 tak salary ka socha tha

Main.jitna main kr sakta hon kron ga es k elawa rehny k lia ya ghar to hy hi tum sab yahin raho gy or sab apny apny kaam ki zrorat ka jo bhi saman tum sab ko zrorat hy us ki list bana k aik amount mujhy btaa do main wo tum ko dy deta hon to abhi k lia wo sab ly lo

Ali.saman to boht zrorat hy

Main.abhi k lia us saman ki list banao jo boht zaida zrori ho

Alina.mujhy aik laptop lena hy

Asif.mujhy kuch explosive k lia chemicals

Salem.mery pass gun hy per kuch bulits us ki leni hain jo khtam ho rahi hain

Aslam.mujhy fight practis k lia thora gym ka saman lena hy

Main.aslam tumhri practis k lia saman abhi itna zrori nhi hy wo ham bad mai bhi ly sakty hain or tumhri practis kisi or trhan bhi ho sakti hy

Ali.han aslam abhi ham es position mai nhi k koi bhi fazol kharchi kryn

Aslam.ok koi bat nhi mujhy bhi andaza hy

Main.aslam tum aik fighter ho na

Aslam.han to

Main.kuch soch raha hon jis sy tum practis bhi kar sakty ho or kamai bhi

Ali.kese
 

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5 hours ago, Nigga said:

Bahi boht achay ja rahay ho.... asi story is forum pa first time dhaki aur believe karo boht maza araha ha pahrnay ka.

Thank you bus ase hi sath bane rahiye