Wah wah wah bohat ala bohat zabardast ... Great job. 

On 1/8/2019 at 9:52 AM, kaka321 said:

COPIED...yeh meri original story ha jo ma ne dosre forum pe likhi thi

g kaka g humIN Maloom hay janab you are good writer

Bhot aaaaa

 

On 17/11/2018 at 10:30, ammad said:

2 page kasy make kro tell me

kam wali sari bz thn to bua ne muje kaha k sumaira ki ammi ko kuch chezen de aun
hamare talluqaat aise the k darwaza knock krne ki zarurat nai prti thi
ma seedha andar gya to sadia aur sumaira sehan mein bethi thn
me:yeh bua ne bheja ha kuch
sumaira chezen le k kitchen mein chali gae
sadia meri taraf dilchaspi se dekh rai thi
sadia:betho
me:nai zara jldi ha
ma ne usay ghor se dekha
sadia sumaira ki hum umer thi lekin bhare bhare jisam wali khubsurat larki thi
sadia:milna ha sumaira se?
ma chonk gya
sadia:hum dono koi baat nai chhupati 1 dosre se
woh muskurae
ma kitchen mein chala gya to sumaira bartan le k bahir aa rai thi
bartan us k hath se le k shelf pe rkh k ma ne usay banhon mein le lia
sumaira:kya kr rai ho?sadia...
me:tum ne bta do dia ha usay hamare bare mein
ma hath us ki kamar se neche le gya aur us ki gaand ki lakeer mein ungli ooper neche krne lga
sumaira:faizi...muje yeh sb acha nai lgta
us ne apne aap ko chhurane ki koshish ki
me:theek ha..ayenda tng nai kru ga
ma ne bartan uthaye aur wahan se nikal aya


''ma nai ab ise lift krane wala''
ma ne hashoo ko sumaira k bare mein btaya
hashoo:tu 1 kam kr
me:kya
hashoo:sadia ko phansa le...sumaira ko jla(jealous kr)
itne mein wo dono hamare pas se guzri
sumaira ne 1 nazar muj pe dali aur samne dekhne lgi
jb k sidra kafi der meri taraf dekhti rai
me:yehi krna pare ga

sumaira ne to hamare ghar ana b chhor dia tha..koi kam hota b to sidra he ati thi ab
us din muje us se tanhae mein baat krne ka moqa mil he gya
wo wapis jane lgi to ma gate k andar wale hisse mein us ka intezar kr raha tha
me:suno
sidra:han
me:muj se dosti kro gi?
sidra:kyu sumaira se larae hogae ha?
me:han
sidra:sulah kra du?
me:nai..tum apna btao
sidra:theek ha...lekin sumaira ko pata nai chalna chahiye
wo muskurae
ma ne us ka hath apne hath mein le k choom lia


''bhai g ap to wese he naraz ho rai hn...muje kya pata tha k un ka faizi k sath jhagra hua ha''
taya baba se baat kr rai the
taya aur sajeela sheher se wapsi pe hamari taraf aye the
baba ko pata chala tha k fazal aur majid log taya k gaon mein shift hue the aur taya ne unhe apni zaminon pe rehne ki jagah b de di thi aur kaam b
baba:yahan b sara gaon tng tha un se..aur phir wo log faizi k sath b dushmani barha rai the...isi liye ma ne nikala unhe yahan se 
taya:ap befikar rahen wo faizi k sath koi sharart nai kren ge
taya abi b unhe nikaalne ko tayyar nai the
baba:han tum ne apne bumashon ki foj mein izafa b to krna tha na
taya:krna prta ha bhai g..election b to lrna ha na agla
baba:merzi ha tumhari..lekin unhe 1 hud mein he rkhna
bua mulazma k sath chaye waghera le k ayi to woh log chup kr gye
bua:bhai aj sajeela ko chhor jaen mere pas...kul hamare sath he aajaye gi
taya:wahan itna kam ha apko pata to ha shadi mein din he kitne reh gye hn
bua:koi farq nai prta 1 din se...kbi to behen ki baat maan lia kren
taya ko akele he jana para


taya k jate he sajeela ne chadar utar phenki aur 1 dopatta gale mein le lia
tight fitting wali kameez mein us k mamme aur b bahir ko aye hue the
aur ma soch raha tha k taya agar usay is huliye mein dekh len to jaan se he maar den
sajeela:ma ne khud bua se kaha tha k ma ne rehna ha
me:baji woh kyu?
sajeela:kbi kbi hamara b azadi se saans lene ko dil krta ha
me:hmm
ma ne sir hilaya aur us k mammon ko 1 bar phir dekha
sajeela:na dekho itne ghor se
woh hansi to ma harbara gya
me:ma kya..dekh raha hn
sajeela:abi tum bche ho...ayi samaj?
me:koi bcha nai hn...8th mein hn...agar muje late dakhil na krwate to 10th mein hota
ma jldi se bola
sajeela:acha g?
wo hans k boli
me:han g
ma us ki ankhon mein dekh k bola
wo kuch der meri ankhon mein dekhti rai aur kuch bolne he lgi thi k bua ko ata dekh k chup hogae


bua sajeela ko apni sahelion se milane le k gae hui thn
ma ne 2 3 chakkar sumaira k ghar k bahir k lgaye aur khule gate se andar dekha
bilakhir sadia muje nazar aa he gae aur jese he us ne muje dekha wo gate pe agae
me:ajao ma ghar mein akela hn
ma idhar udhar dekh k bola
woh han mein sir hila k andar chali gae
thori der mein woh mere pas thi
us ne muskurate hue hath agay barhaya to ma ne us ka hath khench kr apni banhon mein le lia
sadia:sumaira ko bukhar ha to cahachi usay sheher le k gae hn doctor k pas
me:chalo acha hua
ma bed k kinare pe beth gya aur sadia ko apni lap mein bitha lia
me:sumaira ne kya btaya mere bare mein
sadia:yehi k wo tumhe achi lgti ha aur tum us k peche pare hue ho
wo bazoo mere gale mein daalte hue boli
sadia ki baat sun k muje dhachka sa to lga aur ghussa b aya lekin ma kuch bola nai
sumaira he thi jis ne pehle izhar kia tha
me:aiwen pata nai kya samajti ha wo apne aap ko
yeh keh k ma ne hont us k honton pe rkhe aur hath se us k mamme masalne lga
sadia k hont chooste hue ma ne hath us ki kameez k neche se us k pait pe le gya
sadia ki gaand k neche mera tana hua lun phansa hua tha
me:tumhare mamme dekh lu?
sadia ne bs han mein sir hila dia
ma ne besabri se us ki kameez ooper kr di aur sath he safaid bra b
us k mamme waqae sumaira se bare the aur un k ooper light brown nipples
sadia ka mamma hath mein le k ma ne us ka nipples honton mein le lia aur us pe zuban pherne lga
sadia:ssssiiiiii...
ab ma us k dosre mamme ko hath mein le k us k nipple ko choos aur chaat raha tha
sadia k chhote se nipple akar chuke the aur wo ankhen bnd kiye siskian le rai thi
ma apna hath us ki shalwar mein le gya
jese he meri ungli us ki phuddi k lips mein gae us k jisam ne jhatka lia aur us ne mera hath pakar lia
sadia:nai kro na
ma ne hath to bahir nai nikala lekin darmyan wali ungli he us ki phuddi k lips mein ooper neche krne lga
jld he us ki phuddi geeli hone lgi aur us ne apna hath mere hath se hata lia
ab wo khasi garam hogae thi
me:shalwar utaro
sadia:tum utar do
wo sharam se ankhen bnd krte hue boli
ma ne us ki shalwar neche kr di aur us ne khud he pairon se nikal di
aur ne us ki kameez aur bra utarne mein der na ki
ab wo bilkul nangi meri lap mein bethi hui thi
sadia ko bed k kinare pe bitha k ma ne b apni kameez aur shalwar utar di
mera tana hua lun dekh k us ki ankhen aur b khul gaen
me:yeh tumhare andar jaye ga
ma apne lun ko hath mein le k bola
sadia:haaaa...nai na
wo sir neche kr k boli
ma ne usay peche litaya aur us ki gaand bed k kinare pe kr k paon b ooper rkh k diye
sadia ki balon se pak phuddi k phoole hue lips mein ma ne finger rkhi
sadia:sssiiii...
apni poori zuban bahir nikal k ma ne us ki phuddi k sorakh se le kr ooper tk pheri to us ki gaand ooper ko uchhli
sadia:hayeeee...yeh kya...kia...
us ne sir ooper kr k meri taraf dekha to ma us ki taraf dekhte hue jhuka aur us ki phuddi ko chatne lga
sadia:ahhhhh....ooohhhh....ufffff
me:ab acha lg raha ha na?
sadia:han...aur...kro
us ki gaand ab jese khud he ooper neche ho rai thi
ab ma us ki phuddi k dane ko choos aur chaat raha tha jis se us ki phuddi bohat ziada pani chhor rai thi
sadia ko bed k ooper krte hue ma us ki tangon k beech aya aur lun us ki phuddi k sorakh pe rkha
wo kuch sehmi hui nazron se meri dekh rai thi
me:kya hua?
ma apna lun us ki phuddi k sorakh pe dabata hua bola
sadia:ahista..krna..ma ne pehle kbi nai kia...
jese jese mera lun sadia ki tight phuddi mein ja raha tha mere junoon mein izafa ho raha tha
sadia:haye...haye...haye..
aur phir muje apne lun k raste mein rukawat mehsoos hui
me ne neche dekha to abi mera adha lun he andar gya tha
1 zor daar dhakke se se ma ne lun ko agay push kia to muje lgta jese wo kisi cheez ko cheerta hua agay gya ha
aur sadia k munh se halki si cheekh nikli thi
sadia:haye ma mer gaeeee...
lekin ma ab kuch samjhne ki position mein nai tha
ma tezi se apna lun andar bahir krne lga
sadia k chehre pe takleef k asaar b ma ne nazar andaaz kr diye
kuch der baad jese he mera lun pani chhorne lga to ma ne lun bahir nikala aur dekh k dar gya
sadia ki phuddi pe khoon lga hua tha
me:yeh kya hua?
sadia:tumhe nai pata kya hua?
wo ansoo saaf krte hue boli aur bed se utar k kapre pehn'ne lgi
sadia:junglee ho tum to bilkul


''budhu ho tum to bilkul''
dani hansi
mere pas aur koi tha nai jis se ma aisa mashwara krta
me:wo kyu?
dani:arrey yar wo kunwari thi...us ki phuddi ki seel khuli nai thi abi...ooper se tum ne itne zor se kia..
wo hanse ja rai thi
me:tumhara aur kokab ka khoon to nai nikla
dani:kyu k hum dono ki seel khul chuki thi pehle he
me:matlab..
dani:zaruri nai k seel lun lene se he khule...larkian jb garam hoti hn to apni phuddi mein kuch na kuch daalti hn jis se un ki seel khul jati ha...ayenda jb koi aisi larki mile to aram se krna ta k usay ziada dard na ho..thori der main usay b maza ane lge ga
me:theek ha
dani:aur zara pyar se kia kro yar...sex to janwar b krte hn...insan aur janwar k krne mein farq to hona chahiye na
is k baad us ne muje aur b kafi baten samjhaen


raat light chali gae aur generator mein petrol khatam hogya 
baba 1 bnde ko petrol lene bhej k dera pe chale gye aur bua ne muje dukaan se candle lene bhej dia
bua:ja k kitchen mein lga de  sajeela andhere mein khari ha..pata nai kb aye ga petrol
dukaan se wapis aya to bua ne kaha
andhere mein muje pata nai chala aur ma sajeela ki back se takraya
sajeela:dekh k faizi
ma jldi se peche to hogya lekin us ki gudaaz gaand mein jb mera lun lga to usay khare hone mein der nai lgi
sajeela ne candle choolhe k sath shelf pe rkh di
aur muj pe shaitaan aa chuka tha
ma sajeela k peche khara hua aur candle sahi krne k bahane apna jism us k sath touch kia aur mera tana hua lun us ki gaand ki lakeer mein dab gya
me:yahan theek ha
yeh keh k ma peche hut gya
sajeela to jese saaqit hogae thi kuch lamhon k liye
us ne mur k muje ghoora aur meri jan he nikal gae
sajeela:hogya kam?
me:g baji
yeh keh k ma jldi se bahir agya

bua k ki kuch tbiat theek nai thi jis ki waja se sajeela baji ko 1 din aur rukna para
aur ma shukar kr raha tha k us ne bua ko meri shikayat nai lgae thi..lekin wo meri taraf dekh ghor se rai thi
ma bua k room mein gya to bua so rai thn aur bathroom se pani girne ki awaz aa rai thi
shaitan muj pe aya to hua he tha
ma jldi se bahir wali side pe bua k room ki pichli side pe aya jahan 1 thori si khali jagah pe kath kabar para hua tha
ma 1 tooti hui chair pe paon rkh k charha aur bathroom ki deewar mein mojood 1 chhote se roshandaan k 1 corner se andar jhaanka
sajeela ki gol matol gaand meri taraf thi aur woh towel se apna jisam khushk kr rai thi
phir wo muri aur us k mamme mere samne agye
sajeela k mamme bohat bare nai the lekin dani jo us ki taqreeban hum umer thi us se bare he the aur un pe pink nipples..aur hum sb khandaan walon ki tarah us ka rng b gora he tha
is se pehle k ma us ki phuddi pe nazar daalta sajeela ko jese koi shuk guzra aur us roshandaan ki taraf dekha
ma 1 jhatke se peche hua aur apne ap ko sambhal na ska aur neche gir gya
ma jldi se kapre jhaarte hue utha aur apne room mein agya
sajeela ne muje dekh lia tha shayed aur mera dil dhak dhak kr raha tha
apne ap ko aur apne tane hue lun ko kosta hua ma lait gya
thori der baad qadmon ki awaz ayi to ma ankhen bnd kr k aise bn gya jese so raha hn  aur apna akra hua lun chhupane k liye karwat le li
''faizi''
sajeela ki awaz mere bed k kreeb se ayi
ma soya bna raha
sajeela:muje pata ha tum jaag rai ho
us ne mera kandha hilaya
muje ankhen kholna he pari
me:kya baji..sone do na
sajeela:abi 10 mint pehle to tum nashta kr rai the itni jldi so b gye
me:wo aj school se chhutti ha na 
us k chehre pe narazgi k asaar na dekh k muje hosla hua
aur ma uth k beth gya
sajeela:muj se choolha nai jl raha...bua k liye chaye bnani ha
me:kam wali ko keh do na
sajeela:utho ge ya nai?
me:ap chalo ma ata hn
agar ma khara ho jata to meri shalwar mein bna hua tamboo samne a jana tha
sajeela:tum aise nai maano ge
yeh keh k us ne mera hath pakar k khencha aur muje khara hona para
sb se pehle sajeela ki nazar shalwar mein bne tamboo pe he pari thi aur kuch lamhe wahin pe rahi
muje saaf lga jese us ne chehra side pe kr k muskurahat chhupae ha
me:chalen b ab 
kitchen jate hue ma sajeela ki matakti hui gaand ko dekhta raha
ma choolha jala k jane k liye mura 
sajeela:ruko
me:g baji
sajeela:chaye pio ge?
me:han g de den
sajeela:tum kamre mein chalo ma laati hn
wo 1 nazar mere lun ko dekh k boli 
kamre mein aa k soch raha tha k naha  lu aur  muth b lga he ln kyu k yeh kambakht to so he nai raha
ma bathroom mein agya aur kapre utar k shower k neche khara hogya
apna lun hath mein le k ma ne ankhen bnd ki aur sajeela k nange jisam ko zehen mein lga k hath chalane lga
1  2 bar muje aisa lga jese kisi ne muje awaz di ho lekin ma to kisi aur he dunya mein tha
phir darwaza thora sa khula to muje pata lga k ma andar se bnd krna bhool gya tha aur wo sehan ki taraf se ane wali hawa se khul gya tha
ma ne lun ko chhora aur mere darwaze tk pohnchte hue thora s aaur khul gya
side pe bed k pas sajeela khari thi aur k hath mein chaye ka cup the
aur jese he ma bathroom k darwaze k pas poncha us ki nazar meri taraf pari
1 lamhe k liye us ki nazar muj per pari aur ma ne jldi se darwaza bnd kr dia
sajeela ne muje nanga dekh lia tha aur ab muje yeh tnsn thi k kahin wo yeh na samjhe k aisa ma ne jan boojh k kia ha
mera lun ab wese he beth gya tha so ma naha k bahir aya  to sajeela chaye rkh k ja chuki thi
chaye pi k ma ne bahir nikalne mein he behtari samjhi


ma apne gate se bahir nikla to samne se sadia guzar rai thi
us din k baad se us se mulaqaat nai hui thi
me:kesi ho?
ma us se thore fasle pe chalne lga
us ne 1 naraz si nazar muj pe daali aur khamosh rahi
me:dekho wo...ma b us din pehli bar he kr raha tha..warna ma tumhe takleef de he nai skta
pata nai yeh dialogue muje kahan se agye the..shayed hashoo ki bethak mein chhup k movies dekhne se
sadia:acha
me:maan jao na
sadia:sochun gi
wo halka sa muskurae
me:kul bua logon ne taya k jana ha..ao gi na?
wo koi jawab diye bgher apne ghar ghus gae


''bs 10 mint lgen ge''
hashoo ne minnat bhre andaz mein kaha
wo faiqa se tanhae mein milna chahta tha aur muje pehra dena tha
baba log shsher gye hue the aur dera hamare qabze mein tha iswaqt
me:agar koi agya to?
ma bs usay tng kr raha tha
hashoo:wo dekh wo aa rai ha..tuje dekh k bhag na jaye
ma side pe chhup gya aur hashoo faiqa ko le k andar chala gya
aur bahir beth k sochne lga k ghar ja k kya bne ga?
sajeela k samne bar bar muje sharmindagi he ho rai thi aur muj se apne aap pe controle he nai rkha ja raha tha
faiqa k jane k baad ma andar chala gya
hashoo:kuch krne nai deti yar..chal kokab to ha he
wo hansa
kokab ka nam sun k muje koi herat nai hui aur na he muje koi aitraz tha
me:acha g?
hashoo:her waqt tayyar rehti ha..aur maza b sahi krati ha..tere to ghar kam b krne ati ha ..try kr
me:han dekhta hn..wese ghar mein moqa he kahan milta ha
hashoo:yahan le ayen ge
me:chal dekhte hn

dopeher ko ma ghar gya to sannata he tha
''lgta ha sb so rai hn''
yeh sochta hue ma ne kitchen se khana lia aur apne kamre mein agya
abi ma khana kha k laita he tha sajeela agae
sajeela:muje bta dete ma de deti khana
wo chair ghaseet k bed k pas beth gae
me:ma samjha ap so rai hn
sajeela:yeh wese tum kya krte phir rai ho?
ma ne chonk k us ki taraf dekha lekin wahan muje koi narazgi ya ghussa nazar nai aya
me:ma samjha nai
sajeela:itne masoom na bno
me:pata nai baji ap kya baat kr rai hn
sajeela:chalo maan leti hn k muje he ghalat fehmi hui ha
wo halka sa muskurae aur uth k chali gae aur us ki muskurahat muje zara hosla de gae


raat meri pyaas se ankh khuli aur ma pani pene bahir aya to dekha k bua aur sajeela sehan mein so rai thn
jb kbi bahir mosam acha hota tha to bua sehan mein he soti thn bjaye AC k..aur baba to hote he dera per the
bua dosri taraf karwat le k soi hui thn aur sajeela apni charpae pe dosri taraf 
halki si roshni mein ma us k pas khara hogya
ma ne halka sa hath us k mamme pe phera aur jldi se kitchen ki taraf chal para
us ne bra utari hui thi shayed garmi ki wajah se
pani pi k wapis aya to sajeela wese he laiti hui thi
ma thora agay gya to us ki charpar pe harkat ki awaz ayi
ma ne mur k dekha to wo seedhi ho chuki thi aur 1 tang us ne fold kr k neche he rkhi thi
kamre mein aa k b mera dhyan udher he tha
kuch der baad ma dobara bahir aya aur bua ki taraf dekha jo wese he soi hui thn aur sajeela b seedhi he tang fold kr k
mera akra hua lun muje chain nai lene de raha tha
sajeela ki sanson k sath us k mamme ooper neche ho rai the
ma ne ahista se us k dono mammon pe hath phera aur us k nipple apni hatheli pe mehsoos kiye
sajeela ne koi harkat nai ki meri b himmat barhi aur ma dobara ahista se us k mammon per hath pherne lga
ab pata nai yeh mera wehem tha ya heqeeqat k muje mehsoos hua k sajeela k nipples akar gye hn
sajeela ki 1 tang fold hone ki waja se us ki thighs khuli hui thn
dharakte dil k sath ma ne shalwar k ooper se us ki phuddi ko touch kia aur foran he hath peche kr lia..is bar b us k jisam mein koi harkat nai hui
ab ma ahista ahista us ki phuddi ko ooper se neche rub krne lga
aur kuch he der mein phuddi wali jagah se us ki shalwar geeli hogae thi
muje idea tha k shayed wo jag to gae ha lekin sone ka drama kr rai ha
ma ne sajeela ki shalwar nache ki to wo bilkul halka sa kamasae
ma us ki shalwar utar to nai skta tha kyu k is k liye usay gaand ooper krna prti jo us ne krni nai thi..elsatic he shalwar mein so ma ne usay he neche khncha aur kreeb ho k us ki phuddi ko dekhne ki koshish ki lekin itni roshni thi nai
ma ne sir utha k 1 nazar bua ki taraf dekha aur dobara jhuk k apne face us ki gaand k pas khare khare he us ki thighs k beech le gya
jese he meri zuban sajeela ki phuddi se touch hui us ne 1 tez saans li lekin hili nai
itni si jagah mein meri zuban jahan tk ja rai thi ma sajeela ki phuddi chaat raha tha
us ki phuddi bohat pani chhor rai thi aur ma sara pani chaat raha tha
kuch der baad us ne 1  2 aur tez sansen li aur us ki phuddi ne pani chhor dia 
aur ma us ki himmat ki daad de raha tha k us ne apne jisam ko harkat nai krne di
ma chupke se apne kamre mein aa k sogya

Bacha ab jawan ho gia h

Allaaaa

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